In writing we wrote a Trench Diary we had to pretend that we were in World War One
fighting for our country.
WALT describe using our senses
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I see rats crawling over dead bodies and other soldiers fighting for their country. Dead man on the dirt.
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Gun fire on the trench and leaders saying attack. Cannon firing to their enemy.
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I could taste hard biscuits and other stuff. Dirt when i look up at the sacks on top of me as the enemy shoots.
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I could smell smoke coming from the cannon firing.polluted air .
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I could feel my diary writing to my family. My gun aiming to the enemy. Gun shots on me thinking that i am going to die and never see my family.
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I ‘am feeling so sad that my friends are dying please get me out of here if you can’t just deliver clean clothes.
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I’m thinking that i am going to be the next soldier to die in world war one .
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It was easy because we only had to write like we were in the World War One.
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